Narrative Writing

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write narratives

Something I think I have done well  is how I described what the children do to change the world.

Next time I think I could improve by describing the characters a bit more

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Seasons Of The Year

Once long, long ago when the world was young and had no night or day there lived four loving children.These children were special to the world, They could change the world.Their names were Summer, Autumn, Winter and Spring. Summer was the oldest out of his siblings so he went first, Summer made the world hot like a burning desert with no rain to be seen. But, Autumn did not like the hot so she decided to take over.  Autumn made the days just the right temperature but she made the trees’ leaves fall down and get whisked away with the whispering breeze.  Winter became furious because there were no leaves on the trees for her to put snowy hats on, so she thought she deserved to take over Autumn’s place. Winter made the world cold and silent with snowy hats on trees and little snowflakes flooding the world.

Lastly, little Spring who loved her older siblings wanted to make the world not too hot and not too cold for Autumn and Summer.  After the cold winter days, Little Spring thought to bring light and joy to the world so she made the flowers bob up and out of their cold holiday and into their new environment of warm sunlight. She made the breeze whisper softly on the glistening glossy green rich grass on the countryside.